Thursday, 5 November 2009

Jordan's Simile

Like gold, a child is precious.

Like a flower blossoming, a child's personality is always blooming.

Like a dog, a kid never runs out of energy.

JordanW, Year 8

1 comment:

  1. Wow, Jordan - this is beautiful writing - I love the similes you've created.

    Carol

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