Tuesday, 10 November 2009

Animal Cruelty Poem

Horrible, evil, vile, disappointing mistreated.

It’s adequate because it can save lives.

People would say it is vile, cruel, evil and saddening to know animals are being treated like that.

They would prattle it is not pleasant.

It involves hurting and poisoning animals.

The wildlife would say that they hate it and disagree with it.

Lives getting destroyed, blood and guts.

Shrieking and machines.

Rage, sorrow, sadness.

Harmed and destroyed.

Brett and Johnny; Year 7

2 comments:

  1. hi
    your cruelty poem is so cool and caring to the animals

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  2. Hello

    your poem is cool I think it shows you care about the animals.

    From Erina year six 6

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